Six 6 Word Stories
Deja Boyd 1st
Covered in blood, she cried innocent.
He hid quietly until they left.
She instantly ran, purse in hand.
One sip returned warmth to her.
She immediately resold the stolen goods
Again, they ran for their life
Great.
ReplyDeleteWhat if she stole the stolen goods?
Im left wondering why they ran again for their life. Awesome!
ReplyDeleteThe cliffhanger leaves the reader at a stand still, having them making their own ending. I like cliffhangers!
ReplyDeleteHi Deja, I love your stories because they give a mood of fear. Like I can picture what I believe is the other 7/8 of your stories because I can feel the emotion and have a picture in mind of the scene.
ReplyDeleteThey give a sense of fear which i love because it leaves me wondering what else is going to happen or what exactly happened. love your last story, made me want to read more.
ReplyDeleteThe first was sooo good! Left me wondering where the blood came from, how'd she end up in it?
ReplyDeleteThe stories are very well put. They make me think hard about how the situation was and how it ended.
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